Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, July 30, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi sienna,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Alisi from hay park school. Your postcard to miss Agnew must be amazing about your holiday. I read your holiday post card about going to Blenheim and I have never heard that place before, It must be a really nice place to spend your holiday. Bye
Kia ora Sienna,
ReplyDeleteWell done on your postcard Sienna.
It sounded like you were well prepared for your road trip to Blenheim. What did you get up to while you were up there? Maybe next time you could use "I" with a capital letter instead of "i" when you are referring to yourself.
I enjoyed reading your postcard. I look forward to seeing what you got up to during the lockdown. Keep up the good work Sienna.
Ms Lap