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Friday, July 30, 2021

My Post Card

2 comments:

  1. Hi sienna,
    My name is Alisi from hay park school. Your postcard to miss Agnew must be amazing about your holiday. I read your holiday post card about going to Blenheim and I have never heard that place before, It must be a really nice place to spend your holiday. Bye

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  2. Kia ora Sienna,

    Well done on your postcard Sienna.
    It sounded like you were well prepared for your road trip to Blenheim. What did you get up to while you were up there? Maybe next time you could use "I" with a capital letter instead of "i" when you are referring to yourself.

    I enjoyed reading your postcard. I look forward to seeing what you got up to during the lockdown. Keep up the good work Sienna.

    Ms Lap

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